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Post by Mog on Aug 27, 2011 19:48:41 GMT -5
...The subject kind of says it all, really. Yeah, so this is a short story I wrote over my period without the interwebs. It's a bit scary how productive I can be without the web. Also, it's in PDF so I could put it on my Kindle and feel like a real writer. ... Yeah, I know... Attachments:
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Post by Noven on Aug 27, 2011 23:08:43 GMT -5
Oh, Moogle. You manage to turn any shitty day of mine around on its head :'D This is such a great story xD Went to page nine, gonna finish it up later. Maybe try and do something of a review, rather, feedback, though... that's not really a strong point of mine lol
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Post by Mog on Aug 28, 2011 8:32:50 GMT -5
Thanks Noven, any feedback would be appreciated.  Also, WHAT'S WRONG TELL ME. B( |
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Post by Noven on Aug 28, 2011 9:41:14 GMT -5
A couple of... things, all around shit mood, and tired from my last week did it I suppose, all culminating to make one day, and really the last few, suck  Anyways, doing better now lol. Though, I this story in particular fixed me up xD Also, it damn well better be continued. I don't know what all to really say, other than, it's... quite unique, in a good way. Had me laughing a fair bit too. I think I noticed only one error in it, if at all, and not just an illusion of my tired mind. A good read all the way through, eagerly awaiting more~ And, it has a way of having a serious fee mixed among all the craziness, which makes for quite the fun read ;D At least, that's the feel I get from it. Um, yup. Here's to Finny giving you something more for feedback when she inevitably reads it xP I must also add, it's great having you back Moogle I thought we'd be without you for much longer, good to see you dood! |
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Post by FinlandiaWhiteEyes on Aug 28, 2011 10:34:13 GMT -5
Just chiming in to say that putting 'em on the Kindle is a great idea. Will be reading and reviewing as soon as I get the chance. Looks interesting, Maestro.
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