Doing my stuff as a tester: ;D
1. Though his name in the text appears as '
' if I open the menu it says Shinji.
2. When you fist start in your room you can keep examining the closet and getting potions to infinity and beyond.
3. The music only kicks in if you look out the window of your bedroom.
4. Multiple exclamation marks are the sign of a diseased mind. IMO. :3
5. After green hair dissapears Shinji says: "hes gone." There should be an apostrophe: he's
6: Shinji then says: "Augh! what the hell?!" Capital W.
7: Mysterious Man says "hello shinji." Capital S for proper nouns.
8: Whats with the clock in the corner of the screen when music is playing?
9:Once you leave the forest after your battle you can't go back in. So if you don't heal you're stuck with a funky red screen... Perhaps have Shinji mention something about using the dead trees, instead of a road sign...?
10: Sign in the woods: "On A side note..." The A doesn't need to be a capital.
11: The sign by the healing tree should read: "Dead tree's life energy can be drained. (They still posses life in their roots.) Interact with them and various things using the Enter key."
12: "These signs make absolutely no sense from my
perspective."
13: Shinji, upon examining the tree: "This tree is different from all the others..."
14: After a while the red screen dissapears by itself... Not sure if you did that on purpose, but even if it does dissapear the sad music keeps playing.
15: If you choose not to touch the tree Shinji says: "The hell would I do that for?" You forgot to add his name.
16: If you use the tree to heal: "You feel alot better." Should be "a lot."
17: I went back in my house and came back out, sad music still playing. I'm apprached by two randoms.
One says: "Wasnt coming here your idea anyway?" Should be "Wasn't"
18: I have a red screen and no health, the scene still happens. OH GOD IM BLEEDING OUT.
19: Vyse: "Thats not important" That's.
20: Greg: "Were hopeless with you leading" We're.
21: I'm Greg and he's VyseElric.
22: Don't be so rude commoner!
23: You alternate between Sir Vyse and sir Vyse.
24: LOL, Vyse calls me a 'scorecerer'
25: Cyrodiil.
26: Shinji: "He sounds like a fine man to teach me! Do you think you may have room for a tag-along?"
27: "Hello, what are you selling sir?" Capital S, maybe?
28: "Foods and potions yound man. Interested?"
(Why of course my lad, you may find such a herb in the town of Moonwell Pass.
)
29: What's a Hock of Ham? :3
Also, instead of MP for the descrip of the Ham Hock you've put Mop. heh.
30: Upon exiting the shop menu he says "Come again!" But this time you've pulled apart the words 'Shop' and 'keep.' Alternating between again. ;D
31: "Hi can i see your wares young lady?" Comma after Hi and a capital I.
32: "Hello Young man..." No need to put a capital Y.
(LOL, after I sold the 30 odd potions I grabbed at the start I can buy anything. :3 )
33: "Its dangerous to go alone...take this! That'll be "insert generic price here".
Should read:
"It's dangerous to go alone... take this! That'll be *insert generic price here.*
34: Shinji, when talking to Vyse and Greg "Umm hello, can I help you" No capital C in can.
35: "Elric, VyseElric. And that..." Maybe split up Vyse and Elric and just use it as a full name? Also, don't start a sentence with and, bad form. :3
36: If I choose the first option Vyse says "Im VyseElric." Needs an apostrophe in I'm.
37: VyseElric: "*Sigh...* Sure why not" Put a comma after 'sure.'
38: After Vyse joins the party I can avoid Greg but the menu still has him as a party member.
39: It's the start of the game and we all have a pretty much full set of equipment including accessories. :\
40: LOL, Vyse is a thief. How could Greg be anything but a Grappler.
41: Shinji, back in the house: "I dont have time to play right now." Apostrophe in don't.
42: I can now, after getting the two party members go back into the woods.
43: RANDOM NEW SIGN APPEARS OUT OF NOWHERE. VILLAGERS MILDLY CONFUSED. COUNCIL CHUCKLES SNEAKILY.
44: I left the town in a westerly direction and found I couldn't go back.
45: JESUS, random encounter a little often... much?!
46: The dungeon door in the west doesn't lead anywhere... the screen just goes dark them comes back. I'm assuming you haven't done that bit yet.
47: I head east onto the world map. The music starts... and doesn't stop... even if I go back into town...
48: If I enter the town from the east section of it on the world map thingy (If it is a world map) Then I can't move down or right, only left then down.
49: *Goes in the long grass and is attacked by wild pokemon. What do?*
50: Okay, I'm done. The endless world map had me running like an idiot for like 10 mins.
Exaggerating, yes.
TESTING DONE. Told you I was nit-picky.
(Noven)
